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cool!!

its really good animation. but really you surrounded your efforts into something thats already in the media. if you tried to emulate the characters you didnt do that good of a job on it to be honest, if not, its pretty good.

keep going but make something up yourself. the inspiration is there but you just have to do it all yourself.

maek moar!

lol wow

most of it didnt make sense. good job. maybe work on the graphics a little bit more? im just wondering how the hell you got a song and that many frames in just 601.8 kb. that baffled me.

4/10 neat story.

honestly.

its funny and all. the concept is pretty cool. but if youre going to make pointless shit please make it long. look up the demented cartoon movie on google and youll know what i mean. it keeps the audience entertained and stuff. you get your crave for spamming out of the way and a quality movie upon us. its win win and costs no effort.

good luck if youll consider. for now, 2/10. the starting screen was cool.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Heh.

omg

how awesome is this movie?

make more stuff. please. but i have suggestions

1. in lipsyncing on the first view at the very start of the movie, the bottom lip seems to not leave contact with the top lip. if you cant reall handle animating in these views, you should work your way up to the cinematics.

2. the ending was hilarious. it was the best part. i was suprised compared to the whole movie how well made the fall was. but maybe somehow get better quality on the voices. keep going though

3. make it longer. it doesnt really look that great with the file size and the very start of the movie is a low quality lip sync with no play button to begin with. to make it all short for you, make the first impression of your movie as good as possible. a play button, a preloader, a good beginning, and everything, and trust me, youll do well in the portal.

4. again, the lipsyncing. it wasnt that hot. you should make the initial lip positions like you did. they were accurate and on time, but maybe put positions in between. you save the lips in your library and keep animating between the lip positions. its the little things that make your movie so much sexier.

i hope to see alot more from you!

oh my god

that actually wasnt bad. i laughed pretty hard. just work on the graphic detail alot more and practice. even do better on the sounds and youll do fine.

hello

yoyokilla's review down there basically says most of it. just work harder man, youre gettin a bit sloppy with these compilations. the second one was funny but i noticed a small drop from the 1st. and now this? just honestly, with the attention youre getting with these. the attention people would do anything for, youre just jotting things down for a while. these arent quite as funny too.

bottom line, think your jokes out, animate them well in your style, and keep it up.

not bad

wasnt bad. simple but i liked it. keep making stuff. its entertainable. X3

:) cute

good enough to pass judgement really. but please put more effort into your next flash. im sure you tried well on this.youre not spamming or anything. but add detail, higher fps, smooth motions and lips when talking would all make your swf that much better. its all of the little things that make animations so much better.

have a nice day.

hmmmm

really its not much at all. i expected really really really worse from kitty krew. sorry if that hurt your feeling or anything kk people. though i dont think it would.

why dont you people put effort into these things anyway? its not really hard, just go for it. if you have enough time to spam newgrounds you may as well put good into it.

have a nice day. 2/10. it was spam but it was origonal spam.

Eltelelel responds:

thanks for the err... non-review. I bet you enjoyed NOT watching the flash. :P

could be better. keep practicing

you did add disclaimers, but still, the fighting just reaked of dbz, the speech throughout the animation was all a cleshea bad guy gonna destroy for no reason kind of thing. especially the bad guy was just talking like he was from some old fashioned power hunger plot with old saying that just detailed how you cant come up with your own plot, fighting choreography, or even scripts. just be more creative.

as for the animation, most of it was exceedingly good. you REALLY must practice your lipsyncing, the fighting and energy blasts were well made although, again, they smelled badly like a dbz rip-off, and the teleportation, backgrounds, character development all were great. it was an ok 15 minutes and congrats on a job well done.

Marc Klopfenstein @MarcK

Age 33, Agender

Student/Animator

ESU PA

East stroudsburg, PA

Joined on 5/15/07

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